Friday, February 08, 2008

Thunder—Struckkk

Passing by that lonely street,
I noticed a girl very sweet,
It was raining heavily,
But, she was dancing freely,
Splashing the water,
Here and there,
Droplets on her cheeks,
Droplets on her hairs,
Some were about to drop,
Some were tracing the path,
The lightning struck,
Reflected from her glittering eyes,
Mixed with the thousand watt smile,
Hit me right into my heart,
‘N’ I was thunderstruck….

Cheers!!!

5 Comments:

Anonymous ajit said...

good one!!! liked it !!!

February 8, 2008 at 2:20 AM  
Anonymous VIVEK said...

deep inside heart
it was like thousand feeble sparks
air filled with aroma
like thousand roses in the hall
memories blinked like
twinkling stars
when i seen in her eyes
in that thunder storm
moment she smiled seeing
clouds in the sky
i seen fairy blue birds passing
infornt of my eyes
chanting of birds were holding my ears
when she holded my hand in little fear
when i seen in her eyes
in that thunder storm.......

regards
Vivek

February 8, 2008 at 2:30 AM  
Blogger Ravish said...

@ajit
finally, i could write something which was conforming to ur standards. main dhanya hua aj..;)

@vivek
well written Yakastu..really liked it..

Cheers!!

February 8, 2008 at 2:37 AM  
Blogger Dheeraj said...

nice kakke !

dilbara e dilbara
apan ki tu
apun tera

par ye dilbara hai kaun ??

February 8, 2008 at 10:39 AM  
Blogger Ravish said...

@dheeraj
jaani..dilbara kaun hai ye ek aisa raaz hai jo mujhe bhi nahi maloom..

Cheers!!!

February 9, 2008 at 10:50 AM  

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